Fountain in the Rain

For the eleventh day of the June challenge, I attempted a calming poetic interpretation of William Gillock’s lovely piano work “Fountain in the Rain”. My sister used to play this when I was young, and the imagery I inspire from the melody has always given me nostalgic feelings.

A lovely recording: https://youtu.be/Bv7cNhKsTvw

Fountain in the Rain 11/6/21

a semblance of water purling at the base of marble curves

lightly, softly, as if droplets be kisses and the pavement its delicate lover

and then the skies perk and open further

perhaps a glint of warmth would accompany the feeling,

for though the water is gelid, its attitude is becoming

somewhere little daffodils huddle down like infants in their cribs,

the gentle hum of the atmosphere growing brighter as their eyes become sleepy,

drinking their fill from the skies and smiling as they do.

but for now we leave that pleasant flowery dream

the downpour jets its way into a polished basin

achieving such velocity that each drop connects with a glint of copper at the bottom,

for be it not a wishing well,

but how a passer-by does love to be rid of his coins in some opportune place.

a gentle, faraway bellow echoes in the sky,

once, twice, thrice

as if the sky is laughing at its own fickleness

the clouds are tired now, and gentleness returns

for a moment, all is still and no droplets can be seen in the air

but the gentle pool still dances somewhat

an onlooker takes note of the sky, growing pink in the summer dusk

and then walks, leaving that fountain to its own devices

so no one sees that marble smile to itself as the rain slowly stops

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